This started out quite promising - with the narrative that Dorian was escaping from a stalker-ex type. Although the tropes involved (going to the grocery store, unpacking in a new apartment, cleaning up etc) are now feeling a little stagnant with these types of games, I felt there was a missed opportunity with the ending. There should have been more backstory to Dorian's story - and the 'fragments' were a little obtuse. Ambiguity is great and leads the player to question things after the credits have rolled, but I feel there should have been more info regarding the man in the shite vest, for example.
This could potentially be a good prologue for something far deeper, because the story is there, lurking in the dark. Hopefully we'll see more of Dorian in future episodes...