Hi, firstly, I'd like to say thank you for making this game. It's honestly one of, if not the best VN that I have ever played, and recently I have been on a bit of a VN streak. :D everything from the story to animations to the gameplay has been great (though the opening cutscene does need a remake, as it's a bit stiff)
secondly, if it's okay, I'd like to give a bit of feedback and report a few continuity errors.
(1): The game does need a way to allow you to earn cash a bit faster. As the elves were to expensive to buy while doing the story, and having to spend an in-game month or two just to collect cash was a bit tedious.
(2): The bowling tournament would be quite interesting if it wasn't just a dice roll. having some input, if that is possible in ren'py, would be nice.
then for the continuity errors.
(1): Felicity got taken away, yet she was still in Ashley's story to search for Ren.
(2): Maria got taken away, and before she got back, there were two cutscenes where she was still in the hotel. one with Felicity and Emma (if I recall correctly, it's the naki one, but it was because the scene for Maria's return played after that one), and the another one I don't recall exactly, but they were in the lobby.
(3): The noodle shop guy doesn't recognize us during Ren's search, even though we meet him in the slums exploration in the city.
Windows v0.19.1