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Things I enjoyed: Excellent visual quality, which is hard to achieve for a small-sized web build. The night mode inside and outside of the house. The inputfield in the diary was inventive :)

Things I had difficulty with: The audio narration when you open the door has a slight bug - it stops abruptly. There is no feedback on which item is currently enabled, which makes it a bit hard to relate the audio response to the object trigger. There is no (visual) feedback on which interactable item is in range, which makes it hard to find out the interactables without looking at the instructions. Fullscreen button in itchio doesn't affect the game window, which is a shame, I would love to see it with larger viewport. 

Ideas: Consider adding invisible boundaries (colliders) around the space to avoid play-testers falling down (as I did) :P Disabling camera controls during typing the memo note would be nice. Also, consider rendering the mouse pointer when looking at the laptop to assist users clicking on it. 

Great work! 🌃 This visual approach had technical difficulties that were succesfully overcome. With some more UX refinements, this can become a good portfolio piece. Very well done for adding your GitHub repo. 

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Thank you so much for your feedback! 🌙 I’m really happy that you enjoyed the visual style and the night mode.

Based on your suggestions, I’ve made a few updates:

  • Fixed the issue where the door audio would stop too abruptly
  • Added small text hints that appear when the player gets close to an interactable object
  • Added invisible boundaries so players no longer fall outside the space
  • Improved the WebGL fullscreen setting, so the viewport now expands correctly

Regarding the notebook, I kept the mouse look and movement controls active intentionally. I wanted to allow players to move around the desk, view the notebook from different angles, and naturally close it by walking away.

Thank you again for taking the time to play and for your valuable suggestions, they were really helpful and encouraging!

New feature update:

Try moving closer to the notebook on the left desk and press (E) to view the note. It contains a question… I think you might already know the answer, but for anyone who doesn’t, there’s a book in front of them that can give a hint!