Nothing of what you listed is a plot hole.
Part of your list sounds like you just don't like NTR. Which is fine but weird as criticism of an NTR story.
8), 9) and 10) are definitely a common problem, often paired with too fast pacing. Stories that do this right are unicorns. Edit: then again those points also apply to roughly 99% of all other nsfw stories.
Sorry i meant plot not not plothole ( Eng is not my mother language so sorry in advance) . They have stupid plot, but still, they do have stupid plothole too.
-Like when mc furious at girlfriend because he suspected she had sex with ota but after 5 months realized it was akemi. So he went to apologize but this time she actually fucking with Ota in front of him and later HE FORGAVE HER like wtf the change in his mind.
- In the game we can see the mc is a very jealous man but somehow he wanted her girlfriend to f with ota.Bcs of his fetish? ( idk why does he feel fetish and jealous/regret at the same time) .His thoughts are full of words of jealousy/regrets but his words and actions are different. I dont get it
- The mc afraid of losing her too much/want to make her feels happy too much that he allows her to f ota. Absurd logic
I only see the Ota manipulation and Mio mom plot are good, other is too predicable
Edit just to say that i don't hate ntr at all lol. I'm already miserable and i hate myself so ntr feel fine to me.🌽⚽
