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I don't find this game very thrilling or a feeling of discomfort, instead I find it funny. Like other ntr works out there, they have stupidly similar plot holes. Their plots ALWAYS have scenarios like:

1, The husband,bf are too busy with work and always come home late

2, The husband/bf forgive their wife/gf

3, The hus/bf goon while watching wife/gf having seg with other men

3, The wife/gf think what they're doing is fine ( hell no )

4, Wife/gf lied BUT the hus/bf still trust them

5, I do it for my ...

6, The hus/bf allow their wife/gf to hook up with other men

7, I love you ( after all ts? sybau)

8, Why is everyone ALWAYS horny

9, Ntr in hentai = idc about anything, just love bigger dih

10, Useless and dumbass main

11, Blackmail (next?)

Vininy better writes a better plot in the future or the game will have a very predictable (last) ending.

dfenestratingAlpaca31 days ago (1 edit)

Nothing of what you listed is a plot hole.

Part of your list sounds like you just don't like NTR. Which is fine but weird as criticism of an NTR story.

8), 9) and 10) are definitely a common problem, often paired with too fast pacing. Stories that do this right are unicorns. Edit: then again those points also apply to roughly 99% of all other nsfw stories.

Dmhungweb30 days ago (3 edits)

Sorry i meant plot not not plothole ( Eng is not my mother language so sorry in advance) . They have stupid plot, but still, they do have stupid plothole too.

-Like when mc furious at girlfriend because he suspected she had sex with ota but after 5 months realized it was akemi. So he went to apologize but this time she actually fucking with Ota in front of him and later HE FORGAVE HER like wtf the change in his mind.

- In the game we can see the mc is a very jealous man but somehow he wanted her girlfriend to f with ota.Bcs of his fetish? ( idk why does he feel fetish and jealous/regret at the same time) .His thoughts are full of words of jealousy/regrets but his words and actions are different. I dont get it

- The mc afraid of losing her too much/want to make her feels happy too much that he allows her to f ota. Absurd logic

I only see the Ota manipulation and Mio mom plot are good, other is too predicable

Edit just to say that i don't hate ntr at all lol. I'm already miserable and i hate myself so ntr feel fine to me.🌽⚽

viviny28 days ago

Thanks for your review! It always helps us to make the game better.

Tho, I would like to share with you how I feel from what you shared here.

Sorry for the hot take ^^'

1, I mean, it's literally what make this game, this game... If MC worked home, the NTR/NTS would have probably never started. So it would have been for another reason, but I'm pretty sure any reason would be stupid to your eyes.

2, Yeah, If not, I would kill all the paths to a dead end right away. Only NTR where MC doesn't know would remain.I also want it's everytime MC forgiving FMC ^^

3, NTS, literally the main focus of the game

3 v2,I can totaly see why it bother you and I understand. However, I still tried to make sure Fmc asks Mc if everything is fine a lot through the early game. Once a path is established and both sides agree, I don't see any problem.

4, Did you play every path? And read what happened on screen?

5, Same, I can understand the frustration. But if the character don't "do it" for his partner or for themself? Then why are they doing it?

6, NTS, literally the main focus of the game

7, Once again, I can understand the frustration. But the bond the characters share is strong. I see it as a "for you" problem

8, To be honest, this one is kinda hard to balance, because, There are people that want to get straight into porn, and other that like having less porn and more buildup. I once again see it as a "for you problem"

9, Uhhhh, you didn't read the story like it should have I guess? Because it's "kinda" true, but does not represent FMC

10, Yeah, I agree, I created Mc to be pretty dumb at times, (ex: breaking phones), Could have created a character way smarter, but I think it would have prevented me from creating situations I wanted to

11, Same, It's a trope "you" don't like. It's very hard (impossible) to please everyone. People will like BBC, other don't. People will like anal, other don't. And the list can just go..

Anyway Thanks/Sorry again about that ^^

viviny28 days ago

Oh, Also!
Don't take what I said badly. I know the game has many problems, and has so much things to improve. I genuileny want to make the game better each update, and that's a reason why I'm currently working with other member on the story and dialogues of the game.

It's just, I really can't build a game that will please the taste of every one. Sometime, I do things I know a minority of player dislike.

That's a sad part of creating a game/story :/

Dmhungweb28 days ago (6 edits)

You're fine boss, keep your head up boss. For people haven't experienced much ntr content, it's still a big hit for them.Also i do NOT think this game is bad, it's just FUNNY to me, every Ntr is funny to me. For me... watching peak romance anime at 3 am and thinking :" I would never get to experience that kind of love" hits harder than any ntr.

Hope you have a great day boss

Dmhungweb28 days ago (3 edits)

Again, your game is not bad boss, what i stated before were just average ntr plot, not all of them are in your game ofc, i meant, bcs 9 out of 10 ntr have the same plot so it makes Ntr feels predicable and uncanny to me. Bright side, this game has peak art, those galleries and voices are amazing :D

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