This is the first VN I've ever seen that came with a built-in Catalan translation! That's pretty slick; kudos to you for putting in the extra work effort there~
As for the story, it looks like you've got an interesting setting with plenty of potential here, between the cybernetic enhancements we see on some of the girls and the way it affects how others see them (an allegory for queerness, perhaps?). And that's saying nothing of the main girls themselves, who clearly have a long, complex history with each other!
I would've loved to spend more time immersed in it all, slowing down to see, for instance, what led Marta to get her modifications in the first place; or to explore the specifics of how Marta and Daisy met, to see in detail the discrepancy between what Marta was expecting compared to their actual interactions later on, not to mention the motivation behind what got Marta so violently worked up; and most of all, to delve into the central relationship between Marta and Blanca, to flesh out the particulars of their past, present, and future~
But yes, nice work!