I was really gripped by the writing style and how you immersed the player in these different scenes. The changing colors and themes helped me clearly understand which story path I was going down and which ones I was stepping in to. It made this whole overlapping train carts concept work really well! It was an interesting take on a redemption story, where you are faced with encountering not only your own sins, but also the sins of others. To me it seems to suggest that all of these flaws are interconnected. I wasn't totally sure whether I was encountering different storylets or just different paths because I didn't play it more than 3 times, but it definitely felt jumbled up and unexpected each time. Great job!