I finaaaaally got to play your game! And now that I played I found, we weren't so far off each others ideas, haha.
I think you perfectly nailed the jams theme. And not only do you have an amazing voiceover, but also an intruiging gameplay loop. Now I do have to agree with one other comment, that it was fairly easy to navigate trough the level. But I can see this game becoming something very special with time, if you decide to continue working on it.
I can see this game as a sorta stealth game with puzzles and some action sequences, but that's just me, hehe
Anyways, I'm glad I got to try your game and once again, amazing job!