The start of something nice here! Camera had a few glitches. I found the SFX for the dialogue to be very distracting; it didn't align with the music very well. The music in the cutscene clipped when looping, either give it some tops and tails or make sure that your end isn't bigger than your start (matching pitch and timbral content helps too). It also didn't tie into the level music very well. After Jack stops being so epic, when he's talking to the kids I would start a new track that's a little more playful. Great job everyone!