Amazing work, it is so cool to hear that this is your first proper game. Hopefully the first of many!
- Good visual presentation and main menu.
- Awesome work adding poetry and flavor to so much of the text to build on the concept.
- The player should be more visible and stand out. Usually the brightest thing on the screen and maybe a different color/shape.
- Very cool to see procedurally generated levels. You could add variety by changing small things like the colors and shapes. Maybe there could be stuff around the outside of the play area too.
- I was confused at first about what lights to get or not get. It would help if the bad lights look more scary. Like instead of just being yellow circles, they could be like spinning red squares.