OH MY GOD, how did I only JUST notice you already put this up on Steam?? I'M SO EXCITED!!! It's crazy seeing how far you've come from those first few chapters to now being this close to releasing the whole thing! I can't wait to purchase the game when it releases!! >_<
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SPOILERS below:
Just to expand just a tad further on our character's mother, Salyra (SORRY, I LOVE RANTING ABOUT HER), I'm wondering if you intentionally wrote her as narcissistic, because the more I read her scenes, the more her narcissistic tendencies stand out.
This only came to me because I was talking (yapping, actually) to my friend about this story a few days ago in hopes it'd get her into IFs, and since she studies psychology, she pointed out that the mother's behavior seems a bit narcissistic.
I think it's actually very interesting if you had written it intentionally because she, deep down, seems to be trying her best in her own twisted way.
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Anyways, I don't know if I've mentioned it before, but I ADORE your writing. This IF is slowly torturing me... It's got me on chokehold.