Absolutely adored this game! Perfect mix of logic, investigation, research, and a need for copious notetaking/timeline construction. Writing was spot-on. I would echo the other comments about making loading/saving instructions clearer though - I can see this catching on with puzzle fans who aren't familiar with this style of IF and don't know the conventions.
(also, I ran into a bug with the later sequence with the car etc. - I got through, then immediately bumped back to the car a second time, and couldn't progress that time, had to reload an earlier save)