Don't know how to feel about this. The plot was confusing, the art was hard to make out, and there were a TON of typos. I still appreciate what it was trying to do, so hopefully it can get a remaster or something like that that'll clear some things up. I did enjoy the characters after all, especially Rhymond. :)
(PS: I am always happy to correct any typos and writing, if you need someone to do that!)