Nathaniel
Fun - 8/10
Functionality - 7/10
Creativity - 8/10
Theme - 5/10
I think that what's here has potential, but, because it's unfinished, it ends too quickly. I really enjoyed what I played and thought that the puzzle to finish the game was good. I also thought that the art looked really good. Unfortunately, since the game is unfinished, it doesn't fully have the Hero's Journey structure. I can see how this story could be the Hero's Journey story if finished, but as it is it doesn't really follow that structure.