This looks really good. I am getting strong 90s anime vibes. Everything is very accessible. The setup is simple, and the showdown inevitable. It is short. The art is awesome, but there would have been room for two or three God Fist members, a DOPtown NPC, a bit of a description on Billy, a more prominent Reaping element, or a few more tropes. The art on page 2 does not look like a drop to the death from the balcony, rather a desperate slide down a crumbling wall. But that's nitpicking. This is great!