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Your pixel art style is definitely very cute, beautiful, and cohesive. I love the simplified way you presented things with silhouettes and general designs that convey exactly the essence of the drawing without the need for long explanations.

Although I feel that the theme wasn’t as well represented due to the short time in the game, the introduction worked effectively to introduce us to the universe, which is great because it creates the necessary immersion for the player to understand that what they’re doing has a purpose, thereby increasing engagement.

I saw that this is your first game jam, and I must say it was a bold move to participate in two at the same time. It’s impressive that you managed to incorporate both themes simultaneously, even though the one from our jam isn't as present. When I say bold move, I mean it in the best sense of the word, because it’s through taking risks that we evolve, and I’m sure this was a great experience for you as a developer.

Welcome to the world of jams haha. I hope to see you again next time, and I wish you the best of luck with this one. Congratulations on your game!

Thanks for taking the time to write out a thoughtful reply. It was very bold and I really appreciate the constructive criticism you gave me. There's a lot I've learned participating in this jam and I can't wait for the next one I do. 

Thanks again for playing and I really appreciate the thorough feedback! :)