The character portraits and background art were nicely done. I really liked the character designs overall, especially the visitor. The music was fitting for the visuals, and the story was short but interesting (great for a small game like this).
My only two critiques were that there could have been a bit more sound effects (something to indicate someone was dying at least) and the character names could be placed next to the character portraits or on top of the dialogue. I got confused on the second question because of this.