Wow! I didn't think the story was finally finished, but great job!
It took me about an hour and a half to finish reading or maybe more, and it definitely kept me in suspense and excited the whole time.
Although I do feel like the ending was a bit abrupt? Since they didn't give us any more details about what happened next, but maybe those questions will be answered in the extras you'll add in the future.
Great work, and congratulations on finishing the main story of your project!