Woww thank you so much for your review and criticisms! I'll definitely keep them in mind for the future. Yeah haha, there were quite a few spelling mistakes and bugs I don't think I got around to fixing, and the inconsistencies in story/dialogue are because the dialogue was written at the same time as the code (thus the story was made up as I went LOL).
I definitely have more experience now and your criticism offered some new insight. Thank you so much again!