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Pretty uneven game.

Let's start with the good parts. The gameplay was fun. I really like when the weapons in game have a long pause between shots. Makes each shot feel deliberate. Also- the fact the difficulty rises with time is always fun, and I think in your game this element is well implemented. The start is easy, the midnight is hectic. Cool.

Unfortunately, even though I started your game four times I couldn't finish it. First two times the girl changed int a heart shaped bottle, I shot her a couple of times (defeated her, I think), and then the bad guys just kept spawning. I met the ghost girl a couple of times more, but neither the flashlight nor the bullets did anything.

Other thing is the graphics- I think it wasn't bad, but it wasn't great either. I always team up with someone else to do graphics for me, so that might be an option for you.

Over all- as I said- the game is uneven. The gameplay and the difficulty would be really cool, if I knew what to do to finish the game, as the moment-to-moment gameplay really has a nice rhythm to it. The sounds and music really worked, and build the atmosphere nicely. The use of theme is also cool!

I believe, that with more time this would be a really good game. The next goedware jam is 9 days long, so I recommend checking it out :)

First of all, thank you for taking the time to write this feedback !! really appreciate it

In this jam I focused a lot on the game feel and tried my best to make the game atmosphere as spooky as I can, so I am very happy that you noticed that

as for the girl, I think you mean the big ghost. You should shoot it each time it appears ( which happens when you highlight the random object that is next to it ) ... as it will appear for a short amount of time then disappear until you find it again ... I mentioned that in the "How to Play" section... If I had more time, I would have made a better tutorial and fixed the game breaking bugs 😅😅

  for the art , I know  I know ..  it's not that great >> I am learning pixel art, and this is my first try at making a full game with my own art !! and will try it  again in my next jam hoping I will become better at it 

Of course, I will join the Goedware next jam as I am now one of the Goedwares xD  

hope to see you there too

Yeah, I read the "how to play", but I still think that the ghost kept glitching on me. I'll give it another go.

As for the Goed jam- I started a year ago, and stuck around. I'm not the only one- there are many repeated joiners. You'll definitely see my game in the next one :) 

maybe there is some kind of bug with the boss , as I programmed its logic in the last hours before the deadline 

OK , goodluck