I found the game to be quite good and interesting. The characters' stories are very diverse and well-crafted, which is appreciated considering the large number of characters.
However, there's one thing I'd like to recommend: the music. I feel like it doesn't quite fit the important moments. In scenes of tension, sadness, or suspense, the music doesn't convey what it should, and that somewhat breaks the atmosphere and immersion in the story.
For example, when the elf queen, Jia, kidnaps the protagonist, it's hard to take the scene seriously with soothing jazz music playing in the background. The same is true when Ashley gets depressed or when Maria is discovered to be a half-elf.
Simply adjusting the soundtrack a bit to fit the context of each moment would greatly improve the game. It would make you connect more with the story and what the characters are going through.
This is just a suggestion; I quite liked the story. 👍