actually, i think first font is kinda doesnt match the game, you should learn text presentation from games like hollow knight, also game really dark and its hard to see enemies, try to add light source on character ,inputs in game kinda weird sorry, why i should jump on W and not on space or maybe all inputs should be on ASWD or arrows, also i have no strong motivation to go further as a character, there no exploring feel in game, but i think its great work after all, you should prqactice more in all sort of things but mostly on game desighn