I like the idea that you got to continue the story of Felinia for Rainy-bleu, but I tried it out and the dialogue feels a bit...mean. I hope maybe you can tweak it a little bit more if you have the chance to go back on it, and maybe it can be more enjoyable to watch the story continue.
I hope so, this is just a demo of demo, not mot at least. Everything here is dramatic raw and year old, which was resurrected in less than a week and collected in like 3 hours, but and here averywhere my novell meet the ptoblems
(They have more curious history of developmenta nd errors, than a content afterall)
But these is so New Beginnings, couse from two kinds of errors that not can be soluted they have - remake that all project from at first could be good idea, than how many hours I have spent sitting for fix errors of tap characters and indentation mismatches It would be possible to make a separate one
So that ALL very new and will change soon.. When I have time and desire to do it - I finally do it
(For now im in couple of jams, and one is my own:])
Thanks for the feedback!
And here one more thing: What do you mean that "mean? The characters are not in theys characters or the style is not enough literary?
I just wrote this in 2 evenings and sent it to the translator, I’m not aware of such a translation, But if you have any advice on how to help with this, I'm only glad
The novel even had a telegram group, or I can open a forum here in the settings if it needed, anyways we are all interested and believe in comic continue, although that way and my almost Canon-directed script (｢･ω･)｢💙
Ohhh yeah, that's true
When the game was assembled in 3 hours, its Straightaway broke completely for me, so these (sketched for year ago now) emotions and more of thing cant be that donwloaded, but btw when i return my passion and power I'll rewrite the game in a more decent way, that could be the regular vn standarts (I hope) And all of this, gratituding :]