You're way too kind :D
I tried to do my best with the grammar but I'm not a native speaker, and considering it was for a jam... I figured it would be good enough for now. XD When the jam is over and time isn't an issue anymore, I'll def reach out to my usual beta readers.
I'm so happy you spotted the speaking patterns, I tried to keep it consistent but since they don't talk THAT much, I wasn't sure it would be obvious.
Thank you again for playing our game!