I enjoyed it! I especially liked how moody it was, with the lighting and the shadows etc... It felt very melancholic and nostalgic, which was very nice.
I spotted two bugs:
First one shows up if you check the mirror again after cutting your hair, you end up having the haircut CG stuck on forever. I had to reload.
Second one is that if you keep checking the TV stand, you can basically get as many liscences and IDs as you want.
The cellphone conversations also go way too fast, I am a fairly fast reader and I couldn't keep up. I had to wait until the characters were done sending messages, so I could scroll back up and actually read, which was a little frustrating.
Otherwise, I think the game will benefit a lot from having an editor checking the grammar etc... Since the story is a big part of the appeal!
I'm very curious about how the story will unfold and I wish you all the best!!!