Just wanted to let you know that this game is really nice, I played through it and appreciate what is there. I really, in particular, loved the way you were approaching skills. 'Learning' the skill, in a natural, organic way, as opposed to unlocking a skill by leveling up, which is the more traditional thing for an RPG to do.
I hope that you continue this game, the B E aspect is nice, I like it, and having it be explained in lore is fun, it might feel more natural if other characters had this kind of thing happen, if the Elements, fire water, light, etc, had other aspects that can be explored....But I'm getting ahead of myself.
Good script, not perfect but good, helping the refugees was nice, the castle's layout was a little confusing, but not bad...Honestly, I really see this game becoming something big.
For a comparison, I'd compare this game to Renryuu. It reminds me of that game in a way, I hope yours can become as huge as that game is. I really look forward to it, and to any images that come in association with the theme. That said, whats here is very promising, the way you fleshed out characters, the introduction to lore, concepts, and so on, the explanation of things as simple as why the city was abandoned, these are good things I love to see in writing. It was fluid, understandable, I don't think I saw any typos...I want you to be proud of this work, Definitely eager to see more.