Oh man, aside from the Pregnancy, this was pretty good. I would have liked to SEE some of the things TOLD at the end... you know, SHOW dont TELL.... I mean, I know this was a lot of work... but one more epilogue chapter dealing with how the Bullies Mom, Cindy, and Freya, came to be part of the Harem... would have been appreciated.
But I will give this a solid 4 Stars.
My one and only gripe, is having crossed that line.. you know... the.. er... family lines... so to speak.... and gone all in... the promise of that between Melinda and Mary.... and indeed, ultimately between Cindy and Kylie... SHOULD have been a thing that happened.
It was evident that Cindy was going to invite herself more and more... and the end confirmed it... and they even did a PopSwap deep in to the game... so just one scene, where they completely help the MC with each other... maybe another end swap... but this time, felched from Cindy by Kylie, and she just doesnt quite hoover it all up.... would be appreciated, AND explain how neither could stay focused, nor the MC for that matter, on Cindy NOT getting pregnant.
Same with Mel and Mary... there was a rivalry there, which could have been deeply, deprevedly, loaded with taboo sexual tension, that exploded in a moment whereby they fully gave in to both being each other's carnal nemesis, AND the love hate tension that had developed since they first crossed the boundaries that night Mary was listening at the door and ended up invited in to watch.
A real shame THOSE scenes in particular were not fully committed to. It would be different if that 'keeping it in the family' line was NOT crossed.... but it was. Oh boy was it. So I honestly kind of felt IT WOULD go there... but it did not.
Definitely a worthy game in the AVN catalogue though.