If this is actually your first VN, I am so impressed!! It's really very good! The art, creativity, and writing are all really nice. I hope you keep making things because this is an amazing first project and I'll definitely keep an eye on your page!
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I love meta elements in visual novels and I feel like that was executed really well here. The angle of "the more people that read this, the stronger I'll become" feels really fresh, at least out of the VNs that I've read. And I love how the darkness of the story kind of sneaks up on you, almost like the reader is pulled into Fawn's manipulation at the same time as the dandelion is. It surprised me, even though I saw some comments saying it was dark!
Thanks for the lovely read!
edit: I just checked your carrd and saw that you're a vtuber fan and you have an animation on Hakka's official channel????? Honestly now I'm starstruck?? QUEEN
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