What an exciting playthrough to read!
First, the art is so cute. You really want to root for Miss Gloop, and storywise I found what she went through actually...relatable? lol Wanting to meet your heroes, getting duped by the fine print of a contract, and of course I love the queerness of it all. I was totally glued to text wondering how it would all unfold.
No worries on it taking more than 5 minutes - the time WAS optional! We'll say you stuck to the 5 minutes in like...Jupiter time. lol