Here are my thoughts on the game:
There needs to be an options menu for adjusting sound volume. The intro was very loud.
I liked how animated the intro speeches were, with characters moving in the background and the camera moving a little to make things a bit more immersive, but the story went clear over my head.
The shaky first person movement camera was OK by me, but I think having an option to turn the shake off would be a good QoL touch for some people.
When the prompt appears to press E to show the map, I kept trying to press E but nothing happened. I then tried stepping forward and it worked. The prompt should appear at the moment the player should press the key, not before.
It's unfortunate the main gameplay was unfinished, it seemed like you might have had a unique take on the squad-based tactics genre where you command your allies to defend you as you move through the level.
Maybe this was just one project that didn't work out and next time will be better.