Fun concept, and clever idea with a cybernetic eye. I'm not sure if my choices affected the story though, I tried different options, which led me to the same ending. Writing and dialogue calls for some polish, but I also didn't manage to edit my writing in time, so I get the struggle. Still, you manage to paint a cool atmosphere quickly and efficiently.
Tip: If other people don't see the options to continue the story, just zoom out the screen, and the choices will show up