Excellent depiction of the town with the map, and really enjoyed the writing as well. Reminded me of tabletop RPG's, had a great time :)
Loved the mystery element too, especially the bit in "The Pit". Very cool tone, awesome job!
I love tabletop rpg - so I am very influenced by them - I am proud of what I did in the short time but would have liked to have made more of the mystery!
