Viability : Feels like a very complete game!
Presentation : I understand everything thats happening. This game is very relatable cause this is what I deal with all the time lol. This game is very anxiety provoking cause this is basically just my life.
Engagement : I felt engaged and loved the little descriptions! I personally would maybe consider other routes than concluding with ONLY the quicktime event. Or other routes to make it easier? I found it a bit too challenging (or I'm just bad) but I wish there were maybe other ways to get a positive ending? I never got one :( This could maybe just be a preference thing for me and other people love that part, thats fine! You also may not have time to change that this late and thats ok!
Theme : Love the illustrations and color scheme! Very satisfying game to look at. Your art is so good.
Made me hungry. I'd love BLT with chipolte mayo and swiss. 11/10. (don't play on an empty stomach).