Viability: Playable from beginning to end. Would love maybe a small element that I control in the game along side the story? Maybe throughout looking online you find items or files on the computer about the player? just more discovery of the story. :)
Presentation: It is well made. I do love the font and look but it can be a bit hard to read at times.
Theme: I love the feel the look gives. I feel like I'm online and in old chat rooms. Excited to see how illustrations will be implemented! I could see images of a pixilated computer screen could be really fun!
Engagement: Very engaging! I like the introspective story. It makes me want to know more about the character and where its leading!