viability; i appreciate that you marked which passages aren't done so i didn't get stuck. i will say that seeing the plan for the ending Does get me stuck though... having a link that takes you back to the first passage for now might be a good idea :]
presentation: i'm really curious about what kind of images you'll add ! i like the part where the background color changes i thought that was really cool
theme; i like the basis for the story you're telling. i think that your color palette matches really well!
engagement; i'm engaged! this story feels vast in a way that encourages me to explore all the endings i could get and read all of the dialogue :D