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Viability: yep playable from beginning to end (tho it ends on a cliffhanger) i love how the ghost buddy is introduced

Presentation: the way it displays on itch is a little...weird? it ends up cropped weird and cuts off the images. 

Theme: there is a clear emerging narrative, however the choice between an internet argument and the investigation doesn't really make sense. they're just two events that Happen to be starting at the same time. i think it would be better to intertwine them and have them effect each other in some unexpected way, or to just drop one to focus on the other.

Engagement: yep! i am very curious to learn the truth behind how ghost buddy died (i already forgot his name)