-viability; its playable! i didnt get stuck anywhere which was awesome. you will fix the images it will work out
-presentation; i think it would be wise to also style the links that players have already clicked when they're replaying since the color really doesn't work with the aesthetic you've set. i also think making the hover text before you click a new link a little bit darker when its that light pink on green might be wise since its a bit hard to read >_< .the one link thats a "..." near the beginning is maybe a bit hard to notice since its bold and thats the indication to click but its kinda hard to tell.
-theme; i think it might be wise to set your default view to full screen in itch since it looks kinda weird when you open it ....or to figure out a custom size that works well with the resolution you want . the white background behidn the square is a little bit rough but i assume it isnt the final one?
-engagement; YESSS YAYY the well adjusted paragraph is so good. i like that it makes me have to scroll down to see the bottom. truly the most well adjusted reaction. i always like reading your writing and characters :3