So far you've got a good style going! I do think that it could use a little more flavor, maybe a font that is still easily readable but gives off more of a high fantasy feeling would be nice!
I think that when there is a choice of options before the player (such as the three classes you choose from at the start that saved you/determines your class) should all fade in at once or faster? At least I think that would improve the starting page and flow a little bit better
I also look forward to visuals!! You could easily go for a monochrome style with a sepia/ink type of look like an old medieval/high fantasy hero/adventurer's log. It'd be nice to (visually) know the beast that nearly slayed you ( • ̀o•́ )੭ ✧´-
And unless it wouldn't fit for time, I think a slightly longer intro sequence would be nice, however the visuals might carry that plenty once the game is finished? Your choice! Otherwise I would like to learn more about the mechanics that are involved with the game (if it is intended for there to be any deeper mechanics, otherwise, you're good!)
- Noelle
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(I kept soft locking myself and was kinda tweaking ngl ദ്ദി(╥ ᴗ ╥) LOL, but that only makes sense and I look forward to the final product!! Big fan >:D)