I think you have a really strong start! I overheard the plot and wanted to give it a try. I love the theme! Concept, characters, world, all very strong! I love Chamomile!! I felt engaged in my choices especially talking with them. The game is well presented as I can clearly see the narrative. If you have the time or come back to this in the future I’d love to see some art, maybe chat expressions for talking with Chamomile? When it’s finished I’m sure the game will be more viable. Had fun with your wip regardless!