Really big fan of all the little jokes and references in your game (my favorite was the snake one)! :)
My biggest criticism really is that there's a lot of typos and repeating text in some of the panels across the game!! That should be a quick and easy fix though ദ്ദി(｡•̀ ᗜ<)
The art and style is perfect as is, but I think some more pages would benefit from having visuals! I'm sure you'll get to that anyways
I assume your game is intended to have replayability value, so I wouldn't worry about it too much, but it's possible that the game might need to be ever so slightly longer otherwise.
Anyways, thanks for sharing, good luck and have fun! ٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و
- Noelle Haughey