-do you want me to show you how to add a hyperlink into your game Since i think that you can do it so people dont have to copy and paste the reader can just click instead of copying and pasting :]
-i like a lot of your choices and fake choices you have (only one option) But i think you can push that even further and i'm excited to see how you do that. (like having choices that might be intrusive or their worst thoughts and then if you click them theres maybe internal dialogue before bringing you back to make the "correct" choice. Etc)
-i think the timestamps could have a bit more contrast bc they kinda blend in and i kept not reading them and i think the timing is important since its online
-epic burger concept i am excited