Hi Nika, how about adding a bit "gambling" in the girls room? Instead of always "loosing" (love) when peeking you Nika could add the posibility of catching them masterbating beeing so horny they take the opportunity to still their desire with their captain.... 😋 Nami could offer herself for free, Robin begging for a fuck and Yamato takin you by force 😁
Peeking, you could also catch 2 random girls "playing" with each other getting both angry (loosing love) or inviting their captain to join.... 😃
You could add something similar when jerking while the girls sleep. If they wake up they could be angry (loosing love) or astonished by the cock before their eyes wanting to taste/feel/take it in different ways... 😃
So to say, you're doin great, nice story though still short, great texting and goood pictures only the blowjobs are dull (except Vivi's) - only 2 quite simple pictures... What about the obviousness of taking Yamato by their horns while she's swallowing.... 🤷🏽
Thx for your work