Got through most of the side content. Was nice to see Tyranitar finally got in, as well as the partially horny content in the side chapter. Though for the side chapter, may I request that the jumping-ahead links give us a chance to visit it somehow? Could probably move the link for chapter 3 to the choice just before without much breaking, if I understand how things work.
Couldn't look thoroughly enough to find many typos this time, but I noticed the version number thing Gameswitch pointed out below me, as well as the fact that the new Ho-oh scene seems to pretty consistently have a couple of Raikou and Jirachi lines with an HTML spam error at the very bottom.