Very short (like 10 mins), and I wish there were more backstory even if there isn't a plot per se (like, why is there a fish man living in her pool in the first place lol). But the cute art & focus on a female audience stands out from a lot of Patreon porn games. Looking forward to seeing more from your team.
The English version really needs some proofreading, though. I can give you a hand with that if you like. Feel free to get in touch with me on Twitter, @KimchiTea.
Also, your Linux archives have just .bz2 file exensions for some reason, when they should be .tar.bz2. Don't know if it makes a difference for all distros, but Ubuntu doesn't recognize them as archives unless I fix the extension. Not a huge deal, but just so you know.