For your first jam, it's impressive! I like the interaction with the game. I wasn't reassured. The monster didn't scare me but I was more spooked by the anticipation. Your camera was really nauseous though; as I'm writting this comment, I'm kinda feeling a little sick tbh. As the other said, the dialogue breaks a little the immersion, but at least it feels a little human to have some reaction. Great job, keep improving!