I love how the descriptions are so vivid while wandering through the memories of a child, it reinforces just how important someone's childhood is to who they become as an adult. I got the ending where the child comforts another crying girl and grows despite her strife, which I think is a beautiful message.
Also the font you used for English feels hard to read for me, I had to squint to read it, so switching it out for a different one would be nice.