Incredibly charming and well-executed! The story is very cute and you're very consistent with the playful tone, from beginning to end. The illustrations added a lot to the experience, though the one or two that were fully colored (the haunted house?) seemed out of place with the others, stylistically. I came across a couple of spelling issues but can't remember what they were unfortunately. The sounds were funny (especially the doorbell!) but I'm not sure that they are really necessary.