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This is beautiful! The tone of your story was carried through the gameplay, artwork, and writing. The character designs are wonderful, and I'm very impressed by the aesthetic and visual cohesion.

I'm seconding the other comments about the intuitiveness of the ingredients and which ones correspond to which prompt, but it sounds like you're already thinking about that! My other comment is that the forward and back arrows made things a little difficult to understand how to progress; occasionally I sent a spirit away by accident when trying to go backwards. I would have preferred a "try again" button, and maybe a place to reread their story.

Really good work on this!

Thanks a bunch! I'm glad the story and tone hit the mark, and I spent waay too much time on the art & characters so it makes me happy to hear that.

And thank you for mentioning the arrow issue, that definitely sounds like something I’ll need to fix. I love your idea for a “try again” button and a way to reread stories -  that would fit perfectly! 

Really appreciate you taking the time to play and share your thoughts 💛