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One of the better games I've played this jam.... here are my full list of thoughts! 

Please take with a grain of salt I realize you only had 7 days (not sure if solo dev).


Pros:

Itch Page designed superbly

Amazing character design + world building. Strong Narrative focus

UI was polished and consistent with the art style of the game.

The contrast between the joyful feel of the art with the heavy choice gave me a heavy dose of horror induced cognitive dissonance.

Small things like the roaches + cats went a long way in making it feel immersive

Title Screen changing at the end.... 10/10 nice touch.

Overall very polished game with sick animations


Cons:

UI moves a little slowly

Music during cut scenes were great but wish there was more during nominal gameplay

Pacing was slow towards the middle.... few more sounds + animations would elevate this to a 5/5 game (currently 4.6 in my book)


Fantastic job! Hoping you create more visual novels with the same level of character design!!!!

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Thank you so much for your detailed feedback. 

Honestly, I wanted to add more content, but since I’m making the game alone, I had to cut some parts or leave certain areas less detailed. Just finishing the current content already cost me two sleepless nights, and I almost didn’t make the deadline, haha!

This Jam was really about experimenting with different ideas for my next game, so getting your feedback is extremely helpful and something I can use to improve in the future.