Short, but a good job setting up the atmosphere! The running jump-scare was particularly effective. A bug when picking up items next to a note, it would read the note too. The ambient music was a little too quiet to be effective under the SFX. The writing was okay... perhaps a little too on the nose to really immerse me? A few wisps of filler details could have padded out the extreme statements and give them more of a punch; things that people think are important to talk about at the end (kids, legacy, etc.) I also could have used a slower introduction into the fact that this wasn't reality, would have been more effective. Nice work!